Page count

I've been trying a little harder to bring down the length as I work through this revision. All the material pasted into one doc, with breaks between chapters and all that, made a 566 pg. document at the start of this week. I figure a big improvement would be to trim an average of 8 pages per chapter--more in Part 1 and less in Part 2. So far, I've only reached about 1/2 of that--4 pages from each of the first two chapters. And those were painful cuts.